Leah Clearwater-werewolf-Quileute

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Character Name: Leah Clearwater
Nicknames: lee-lee, harpy
Age:
Gender: Female
Pack: (Quileute or Rogue) Quileute
Physical Description: (100 words) Leah Clearwater is smaller than the others, light gray, and the fastest of all the wolves. Leah is beautiful in an exotic way. She has copper skin, black hair, and eyelashes like feather dusters. She stands at 5'11 and has short hair. Leah is the only girl, she is female alpha. Leah was also a seinor
Personality Description: (200 words)Leah is very bitter and cynical, and constantly antagonizes the pack by thinking about things that the others want to avoid dwelling on. She also likes to antagonize Jacob by bringing up the fact that Bella plans to marry a vampire and become one herself, when it is clear that Jacob is still in love with Bella. She is judgemental and very aware of things

Personal History: (300 words)During her freshman year and before his change, Sam and Leah started dating. They fell in love, but then Sam changed into a werewolf. He disappeared for two weeks and Leah was frantic with worry. She and her family spent the entire time looking for him, fearing that he had gotten into an accident in the woods. When he finally did return, he did not explain his absence and people began to assume that he had gotten into something shady like drugs. Leah stuck by him, even though she was frustrated by the secrets she knew he was keeping from her.

Eventually, Leah’s cousin Emily came to visit her and Leah introduced her to Sam. Sam imprinted on Emily and was forced to break up with Leah. This broke her heart not only because she loved Sam, but because Emily had always been like a sister to her.

Leah was forced to sit back and watch the love of her life court her cousin. Jacob says that "She puts on a brave face. She’s going to be a bridesmaid."

But then something utterly unexpected happened and Leah and Seth both changed into werewolves. But this transformation was not for the best. Not only did Leah finally understand what had happened to Sam and why he had left her for Emily , but the change was such a shock to her father Harry that it gave him a heart attack

Leah is currently the only female in the werewolf pack and she uses their mental connection to punish Sam and her pack brothers with the memories of the torment she suffered and purposefully thinking about things the rest of the pack would rather forget. Jacob sometimes calls her a "harpy".

Likes: Jacob
Dislikes Bella
Strengths: Protecting people and pack members
Weaknessnes:[/bStray animals, trusting people running
Powers: Protects lands
Other: (if applicable

[Admin]

Hi there, and thanks for your application. There are a few things that you will need to fix up before we can accept it, however.

Right off, you will need to proof read and spell-check the whole application. Even though everyone makes mistakes we are a literary site and there is no excuse for poor grammar/spelling as Word will generally fix up most of it for you. If you can attend to this, it would be greatly appreciated. Also, she will need an age.

Secondly, you will need to add some to the Physical Description and Personality sections. You are missing at least 50 words from the former and 150 words from the latter. This about how Leah holds herself in both wolf and human forms; what color her eyes are and how her face is structured. If you have a picture of someone you are using for her, try to describe the picture. With the Personality, try to expand on why she is the way she is. It wouldn’t have been easy for her to have been around Sam and feeling the pangs of unrequited love. There is a lot you can explore here. Also, there is no such thing as a female alpha. Leah is the only female werewolf. What good points does she have? Obviously Leah isn't horrible 24/7 - what is she like with her family and friends?

With the Personal History, what did Leah do when Sam imprinted on Emily? How did she know he had imprinted? How did he explain to her that he couldn’t be with her anymore?

You say that Leah likes Jacob, but the books (particularly Eclipse) don’t seem to lean that way. We are RPing pre-Breaking Dawn, so Jacob does not have his own pack yet and everyone still believes in Sam as the alpha. Did she like Jacob all along? If so, why, and why did she hide it?? She will need more likes/dislikes.

With her strengths and powers, how does she protect lands? All werewolves protect their territory - maybe for her powers you could just put the wolf standards?

Thanks for taking these changes into consideration. Once you’ve adapted the bio to reflect them, please post back here and I will go over it again. Cheers!